Wednesday, April 23, 2008

Emily Dickinson "I Like to see it Lap for Miles"

there are two ways i view this peom: one about a train and the other about a horse.
at first i did not see the train maby becouse i dont see them the way she does, she speaks of them as things that move on and on and our not grace full but very close to it and that are load as well but in a nice way. i dont view them this way, not really. i saw it as a horse as well!

Train: (translated)
i liek to see the train go
it moves up vallies
and stopes to refill on fuel
and then it keeps going in an way that makes it seem busnness

around moutains
and looks on
at roads in gruops with other trains
and stop to at cross roads

it fits well its shape is liek ribs
and craws between vallies
making loud noises all the while
it makes wisles noises
and then goes down a hill fast

it blows out steem thats really loud
its on time just like the night is always after day
then it stops no more at a crazy rush with powerfull movement its now docile
then its at the station


Horse: (translated)

i love to see them move
they hide in vallyes
and drink from streams or barrles
they have a very busnness atitude

the move up moutains
and look at cars on the road
in gruops
and then they move around quarrys wiht humans in them

they run between tress
and run in canyones
they call otu to one another like for they have less room to travil
they neah loudly
they also chase one anouther when they have time for fun! they are so free

they grow louder
and are in time cought liek stars
they are stoped there run and turned to docile pets
then they are brought to a stable to be sold


so the train i think if its that she is just describing it
and the horse she is saying that they are once free and run around wild
having fun but then we trap them in and cetch them!


alright bye!

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